Tanka inspired by a greyhound called "Bitter Tears" and a greyhound called "Dimmed Hope"; they came first and second.

~L.~


Haiku Challenge: Hope's Bitter Tears



Bitter tears drowning,
Positivity's spirit,
All hope now seems lost.

Where there's a candle flicker,
Although dimmed, hope still survives.






Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-11-18 at 13:37

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