That quivering excitement you feel in your soul when you meet someone special and know that something good is coming


Stirrings

A slight stir rustles beneath these trees, this earth
A silent, rich fireball sun-force
Vying to permeate my skin,
With a murmuring restless wind
It summoned from the fervent life-center of Earth
And roars with the mighty rumbling passions of some million thunder!

It flows thru the grass blades, the ocean waves, the sunbeam, you, me, All.
The Life-Force glints and glimmers in the shimmering leaves.
Eagerly awaiting their spring, their AWAKENING.

Because we live breathe LOVE let life flow into our eyes and ears, over our breast and tingling, blow through our minds
And, like a heartbeat, pulse into our deepest highest farthest and nearest dearest fiber and particle
And am I an idealistic fool, or do I observe the beginnings of a love taking tentative (but eager) root within me?





Poetry by Namaste
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Written on 2008-11-22 at 23:38

Tags Love  Stir  Awakening 

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weirdzarun
Beautiful. The words cascading and bumping into each other make the effect all the more genuine and true. Very good work.
2008-11-24


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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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"And, like a heartbeat, pulse into our deepest highest farthest and nearest dearest fiber and particle"
*Wow* Those lines are my favorite ones! :)

"That quivering excitement you feel in your soul "

Well written! I like it*applause* Welcome to poetbay:)
2008-11-22