My Darling Moon...

My Darling Moon,I love you very much
You are the unique beauty that I admire

Deep inside mine heart resides a desire
All I want is to feel of your tender touch
Reflections yours I have seen on the lake
Low here you were though so high in sky
I adore your heavenly presence so nearby
Never I dare to disturb lest you get awake
God!It's nice to see you sleeping on water

My fantasy when replaced is by cruel reality
Off from my eyes I shake my optical vision
Only to gaze up there where you exist better
Neatly laid upon a starry mantle with royalty

It seems to me you're so sad in that mansion

Lightning and clouds, such are your company
Of lovely scenery from far above you partake
Vast sky has given you as court stars so many
Earthly beings think that you control destiny

Yet, your essence is for Mother nature's sake
Obviously your changing moods is so uncanny
Ultimately, let me tell you ... I just adore you!!!

Poetry by Danny...
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Written on 2005-07-09 at 10:41

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
a good write, altho needs a bit of a touch up on the grammar... and "optical vision" seems a bit redundant, in my opinion.. but it is simply that, my opinion, and the one whose opinion matters when it comes to your poetry is you. however, with an edit, i think it's a keeper :)


I do love the moon, I am simply fascinated how it is connected to us and the earth! How it controls the tides and so many other things. Lovely write!

chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr the moon, companion of the earth for time, heavenly indeed. waxing and waning as the tides wave.