About The One That Broke The Stone Wall From Around My Heart!!


Him...

He Is On My Mind All Night And Day

I Wonder If Hes The One To Stay,

He Broke Me Down From Being So Cold

I Hope This Love Is Bold.

Itz Like He Looks Right Through My Eyes

He Says There Is Nothing He Despies.

He Whispers To Me Like My Life Wouldn't End

Pushing My Luck With My Thoughts Till They Bend

And Break

 





Poetry by Brooke Michelle
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Written on 2008-12-31 at 08:20

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Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
i like the rhyme scheme, very good. and that's a very good ending "until they bend
and break"

i like how the last line departs from the rhyme, that's very good. nice work! :-)

t.
2008-12-31