we were writing limmericks in english, this one was written later that day when we ended up writing a million of them. just picked this one out because it was really the only one that made sense :P

The Shy One

There once a a beautiful flower
Who didn't really have much power
The days were sunny and bright
But the flower took fright
And always stood low and cowered

Poetry by kata
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Written on 2009-01-09 at 19:15

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Some flowers can be not seen like other flowers of beauty, there is so many facets of beauty, so the title is certainly gives me understanding of how a flower can somehow look shy or in obscurity. I like the Limmerick style creating it's shine of talent expressed. You write very well and use a storyline with depth with fun and emotion. Well done!!

E. B. Davis
This little poem gives off a wistful feeling. Short and bitterweet