Couldn't decide so
I have two versions
of the same poem, just
with the lines switched around.

~L.~


[Ver.A]Melancholy Bues[Triolet]



Melancholy blues, hold me tight,
Although I try, I can't shake them,
Sacrificing sleep every night
Melancholy blues hold me tight
Unbeknowing how to make it right,
Consistent mistakes made again,
Melancholy Blues, hold me tight.
Although I try, I can't shake them.


12/02/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-03-03 at 04:33

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