I was a bit bored and doodling, and even I don't know what goes on in my head sometimes.

~L~


Innocent Crimson Dead




Stone hearts beating
Two bloody claws,
Fangs of crimson
Dripping tears of the dead,
Walking in oblivion
That is life's edge,
The tentacles of war
Feed a greedy octopus,
on lies, deception, and the innocent.

13/3/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-03-13 at 11:48

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Liz...if this is how you write when you're bored and doodling...
then stay bored and doodle some more

Enjoyed this poem

xxx Stan

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2009-03-13


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Intense; with truths. Thank You.
2009-03-13