*I will now include vocabulary definitions to help aid in the understanding of my constructions which might be called "poems". I will do this from now on.


A Glint Of Light (repost with vocabulary aid)

A glint of light crepitates

throughout the violaceous skies,

disappearing into the gloam of tomorrow.

In less than a fractured second,

the light was gone.

Left were only its vestiges

to fuel our sorrow

as the hint of night awaits.

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 vestiges  n.- A visible trace, evidence, or sign of something that once existed but exists or appears no more.

violaceous  adj. - of a violet color; bluish-purple.

gloam n. - twilight   or  v.- To begin to grow dark; to grow dusky

crepitate  v. -To make a crackling or popping sound; crackle





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2009-06-17 at 16:07

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Kathy Lockhart
This is powerful artistry Melanie. Wonderful imagery!
2009-06-19


chuma okafor
Simply lovely...and you very wellinfuse your unique motherly kindness to you poem.cheers!
2009-06-19


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
My goodness Melanie...you are a walking Thesaurus

xxx Stan
2009-06-18


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Melanie Sue , there is no might , no dout at all. You write great poetry. You , your poetry , stand side by side with greet American writers , that I lover.Who fore many years , written great works , using words as lover make love , with care and and thought. Using the rich language that is the English written word's.
So in futcher ,yes emplane what the word's meen , but do not apologise ,please.

Ken ( D Williams )
2009-06-17


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Thank you

Now I understand
and appreciate this
a lot more then I did
upon first reading.

~L.~
2009-06-17