Inspired by[Aussie band]
Mental As Anything's "Not Enough"

I was trying to write a love poem.


Not Enough

Not enough of loving from you
to justify everything I do
treated like a doormat, so rough
this old heart ain't so tough

I bought you your pussy cat
as I leave I'll take her back
keep your trinkets of gold
to remind you of me when you're old

I know you too well
can't fool me with the lies you tell
your body's too cold to touch
was a returned love from you too much?

For being treated so rough
your grovelling is not enough
I am not sorry I can't stay
enjoy your lies on this beautiful day.


Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 607 times
Written on 2009-06-18 at 16:18

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text

Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!



I dont know what else to say!
This was just....WOW...
Wery well described emotion :o)

Hugz -m

Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
I guess if this is the kind of treatment you will get from someone you think you love, better leave him or her. You deserve another one who can cherish and treasure you with all his or her heart. Don't you think? thanks for sharing my friend!