Truth hurts, especially all coming at one time.


Your slap in the face
Took a long time coming, but
Message understood.

Haiku by TonyD
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Written on 2009-10-24 at 08:38

Tags Truth  Hurt  Time 

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
:D that was a good one:) and it leaves the reader wondering what happens next? Well done*applause*

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
That or the cold water, both effective, made this effective

Elle x

Rob Graber
Unusual subject for a haiku; well done!

If Tai had slapped you in the face
you would have gone to infinity and beyond
my dear poet friend! but I don't believe in
violence, I prefer to let karma play.

Lovely haiku on getting the message.

Smiling at you