The pleasure of desire

Do you know where to touch
to make me fumble
to make me breath
to make my heart fall
as my body and senses rise
above the call of your touch

In another time and space
your hands wanders my body
with the heat of desire
to make my breath fumble
to make my senses fall
into the most erotic fantasies
of them all

Where the lips plays
and our toungues writes
the warm embrace
to se and explore the face expressions
then we breath together
in seconds of pleasure
as the blood in our veins tickles and floats
we come one
and in a moment our passion exploads

Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-02-21 at 15:05

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Christian Ward
A very hot and sensual write

Oh! Oooh!! Oooooh!
You just took me to another time and place and filled me with longing.
Very well written indeed!

lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
what more is there to say than wow!!!!!!1

well done for a very subtle treatment

Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautifully done.

Zoya Zaidi
They are called:
"eratogenic zones"
To each one, his own!

((((((hugs Milan for a very erotic write))))))

Woman, thy name is...

Love,xxx, Zoya

I have to agree Finnman, this one is very erotic!! you write it really good, maybe you should write erotica ^^ haha :P

just kiddin, really impressive, the feeling in the words and the pics you create... so good =)

c g shankar
Desire is fire and love kindles it!Touch, kiss, embrace are powerful to arouse desire, but love is the catalyst to fire the desire! Desire starts as romance but the fire extinguishes only when the souls meet in ecstacy and fulfilment! Nice write!

Ouh....very erotic and sensual one...makes me feel warm =)