i wrote this for a friend to hopefully make her feel better


Alone in this world
All by myself

I see others
The look of joy on their face

Brought on by the affection of another
Together they laugh
Together they cry

Me alone in this world
I cry to myself
I suffer within myself

No-one to be my comfort
No-one to offer me affection

Just to be held in the arms of another
Just to share a moment of humanity

To be told 'i love you'
To be told 'and i always will'

Im sick of me
I need to hear the thoughts of another

To know im not insane
To know i am loved

Poetry by MIK136PARKS
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Written on 2010-05-02 at 22:56

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good stuff

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We search for love everywhere instead of looking within our ourselfs thanks for reminding that love starts with me

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Very good , I understand this poem totally and completely .
Ken D Williams

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