K, this is the first poem I've written in a while... so, it's not that great...

Beat On

You want me for my body
and not for who I am
Is all of life such an
unforgiving scam?
You say that you need me
but I know that that's a lie
I know that you're the only one
that really makes me cry
Even though I know that,
I still fall for your charm
I think of all the good things,
but not of all the harm
You may be teaching me
what life is all about
Of the pain and suffering
and of overwhelming doubt
You flirt with other girls
but still you sweet talk me
You think of only you
it's the "us" that I don't see
You think I will fade away
when you are forever gone
But on the contrary,
My heart will beat on...

Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-03-04 at 16:10

Tags Beat  Heart  Love 

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Auh great poem and great subsitute line. Its perfect and now completely all yours! Great job!

I love your poem but... there is a problem. I really think you should remove the lyrics from your poem in respect for the song and artist. The song's name is Always I believe. Great poem otherwise!

Oooo, two-face people suck!! They will act like they like you so much, and then flirt with other people--yuck, happened to me in the past!!

That is so good! BLOODY BRILLIANT!!! ::::D

ooh. i like it. i'm gonna bookmark it. 'cause it's that damn good.