Butch Bitch



Too butch
For fake lashes,
Too bitch
For pink,

I stumble along
This ethereal path,
Groping for a hint
Of what to do next.

Too butch
To care,
Too bitch
To love.



Poetry by Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-10-21 at 12:08

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Keiko
This is so true. At times I feel just like this poem you wrote. Keep up the great writes. Your dear friend Keiko
2010-11-29


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Esti...
Good write...

But I believe you are not TOO anything...but just right

xxx Stan
2010-11-14



you got the youth's spirit you
2010-11-01


NicholasG
Prisoner, locked between yin and yan?
Could this be the definition of sanity?
:-) Nick
2010-10-26


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
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2010-10-25


Rob Graber
PS: This beautifully poses the fateful question: A certain amount of independence is a good thing, no doubt; but how much is too much?
2010-10-21


Rob Graber
What a dramatic descent, from assertive in stanza 1, to pathetic in stanza 3. Cool write!
2010-10-21


Mklnay
The first four lines could apply to me, funnily enough! X3

An entertaining read! Loved it, and thank you!

Regards,
~Mklnay
2010-10-21



Hmm, I'm not sure I believe the last two lines, otherwise, an honest self-assessement???

I like it.
jim
2010-10-21