Sundays in the Alzheimer and stroke wing . . .


The Saint

Down a dim hallway of my father's last home
She was sitting in the same place each time
I came, in her wheelchair near a window
That looked out on nothing but the wall
Of another wing, another one-way window
Of waiting for something no longer known.

The little light fell on her wispy white hair
And it seemed to float there above her face
Like dust motes, or the shimmering halo
In a Renaissance painting of a saint
Looking past her mortal agony to certain grace.
What she was seeing then was not of this world.

But most, I can't forget her mottled hand
Trembling on the blanket in her lap, how
In a sudden numb stroke was flipped on its back
Like a turtle, the grasping gestures of turning,
How her fingers clutched and cupped the air,
Trying to hold on, endlessly slipping away.




Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2010-11-21 at 14:35

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done, Fog. The flatness of the writing perfectly suits what is being described.
2010-11-25


shells
You have captured the very essence of humanity in all its frailty, I have been on both sides of the emotional fence, nurse and daughter.
2010-11-22


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Powerful writing my friend, powerful! I can see her and feel her presence. As I approach that part of my life I wonder if my mind will really be writing cheques my body can't cash. I fear a healthy mind locked within a prison of failing cells. My prayer is that when that time comes I will have evolved my spirituality to the point where the failing cells just don't matter any more. You have caught that anxiety for me.

Joe
2010-11-21


John Ashleigh
A very touching poem - I have never known the pain that comes with great illness, but I deffinately sympathise. Thankyou for sharing!

Regards,
John.
2010-11-21