I'm using mosquiteos as an interesting metaphor.
If anyone can come up with a bridge to link the
whole song together I would love your help.


Stop Trying to bleed me dry [song]

VERSE ONE
Annoying mosquiteos suck your blood
attacking you with cruel mouths
Passing their nasties into you
Not caring who they hurt

CHORUS
Get your buzz outta my head
stop trying to bleed me dry
stay away or you'll be dead
i'm sick of your itch making me cry.

VERSE TWO
You fly low - slipping past all defences
and sneakerly begin your attack
but now i'm aware of your nasty ways
your evil manipuations won't work on me.

REPEAT CHORUS

BRIDGE



08/03/06



* feel free to come up with the bridge -
but it MUST be FOUR[4] lines long
and link the first & second verse nicely.
Liz.



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Written on 2006-03-08 at 02:07

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Veld Cooper
Hate these with a passion, too! Did you know only the females suck blood (mosquitos that is)
2006-03-12


Christian Ward
Damn this is good!
2006-03-08


lynn
i love it its brilant!!!
amber lynn
2006-03-08


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Hey liz, good metaphor. So what's a bridge i have no idea about song writing. Anyway some words for thought.

"Insects borrow into your head
feeding on your very soul
poison dripping to the floor
they're fat and happy not much more"

good stuff.
2006-03-08


Marie
Can't think of the fourth verse, but I'll let you know. Love it Liz!!
2006-03-08