For my daughter . . . finding each other after thirty years.


Cinema Veriti

I try, but I can't let loose of this feeling
That you are the last chapter of my life,
The final reel of a movie with an ending
That everyone says is too unbelievable;

Where, in the end, the haunting heroine
Embraces his hurt with her own, saving
The flawed and wounded hero, not from
Some sinister foe, brutal and implacable,

But from himself . . . he, who everyone knows
By the end, was far more vicious, unrelenting,
Unforgiving of him than any enemy he knew.
And when the camera slowly moves to his face,

Full-frame, as she takes his hand in hers
And says "I have found in my forgiveness
Something missing in me, and the love of you"
There is this emotion there, behind his eyes,

That the camera captures and reveals . . .
How, in her finding in him something worthy
Of love, he is afraid of both the having and
The losing of this undeserved denouement.

The camera pauses, pulls back to hold them,
As music swells and the scene fades to black.
And in this ending are the lines unspoken . . .
The script on the next page, not yet written.




Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-01-03 at 17:37

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
The artist's dilemma: selecting the place to call the ending, though nothing really ends. Well done.
2011-01-07


ngaio Beck
Wow! This is heavy stuff. Almost too important,save to say "Well said and Peace"
2011-01-04


Doreen Cavazza
What an amazing write, and the last line is powerful. What a wonderful experience. I like this very much.
2011-01-04


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
How I wish I were that hero, flawed and fearing as he is, to have met,loved and been loved by the heroine you have defined so well.
Alas... I am no hero but flawed and fearing just the same.

I will be haunted by the power and majesty of this for quite a while my friend.

My daughter and I met three days ago and spoke after a ten year absence from each others lives and hearts.



Joe
2011-01-04