Dare to Love You?



It's something that keeps pushing this heartbeat forward
when the mind of me are holding back
the discussions in my soul beats this feelings
but just up and down
no solutions are there to find
just these restless feelings
hard to make up in my mind

It's something that keeps me going towards you
when your'e eyes captures mine
when your'e smile crawling up and put a smile upon my face
then I become a glittering soul
with an unknowned hole
a hole full of questions
questions full of hesitate

The answers that I maybe don't want
wan't to know better than I already do
the feelings I won't express infront of you
because I feel I'm not going to be able to dare to love you




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-03-08 at 20:23

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Zoya Zaidi
Dear Malin, I have a poem exactly of the same dilemma between heart and soul, between mind and heart, waiting to be posted, (lets see when I can post it), There is one in Urdu as well.
Well heart is really running away with it all the time, and mind keeps telling it to come back...

((((Hugs for that warm write))))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-12


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
never mind the grammar the poem is obviously from the heart where all good love poemds start lolololol well done
2006-03-08


Tai-Li
Dear Malin,
This is, quite obviously, a first draft of a very lovely poem. Please, go over it again, correct the grammar, take out the typos, put in the right punctuation and you'll come up with a gem. A real gem!
This comment, with tremendous respect to your writing in a (to you) foreign language.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
2006-03-08