Matthew like Lego

like a brick
you just fit

unconventionally
we tessellate

imperfect perfection
is our connection

virtually together
while apart




Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2011-12-09 at 18:41

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Nicely sustained image of a brick and how it is part of the whole, but equally separate. Unique description of a relationship.

William
2011-12-11


la tristesse
Gosh, praise indeed! Thank you! Glad you liked it.
2011-12-09


John Ashleigh
I like the concept of this poem - the originality has me in awe. The third stanza is very poetic and shows off your talent. Thankyou for sharing this with us.

Regards,
John.
2011-12-09