I took my favourite poems that I have written,
Journey & Continuing My Journey, & turned it into a Pantoum.

~L.~


Journeys(Pantoum Challenge)



My eyes are shinning so bright and clear
nothing negative is gonna get in my way
I have started a journey amazed I follow and watch it unfold
I am feeling so focused and calm today.

Nothing NEGATIVE, is gonna get in my way,
only I can hold myself back
I am feeling so focused and calm, today,
Fighting back am I, the tide of black.


Only I, can HOLD myself back
don't fight swim with the flow
fighting back am I the tide of black
just breathe slow and let it all go.

Don't fight - SWIM with the flow,
It feels like all of my dreams, close to coming true, are near,
just breathe, slow, and let it all go,
my eyes are SHINNING! So bright and clear.

28/01/2012





Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-01-28 at 11:04

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Also, I had the same idea, to merge old poems but it didn't work but hm, after reading yours I will try again:)
2012-01-29


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow girl! Amazing! If I were you I would print my poems and leave them in places where people need to read them and have the time to read such poems:) or need something to kill time while waiting or

read your poems(for the blind ones and others too) and publish them on youtube, those who seek will find your poems: ) I remember that you once upon a time did read aloud some of your poems, uploaded them on facebook, remember? Once again thank you for sharing and keep writing!!!

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