Not sure I like this one -
I have a cold so my head's all blah.


Strip Away.

*"You can strip the flesh
until the skeleton is bare
but still can not revel
all the fears and secrets
in it's cupboard."

How do I strip away
the anger and the fear?
to rediscover the true me
and instead of pushing away
with my tantrums I keep you near?

27/03/06.

* I don't know if I made this stanza up
or if I heard it somewhere?




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-03-27 at 03:18

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GB
Hi ... I think this is fine mate .... head cold or not .... nice read ! .... Cheers ! G
2006-03-30


Veld Cooper
I think all the best poetry emerges from fevered states of the body, heart and soul.
2006-03-27


Jon Hanover
Is it " revel " or " reveal " ? I get the theme inside this piece, just would make it fall into place with the clarification. I like a fevered state it makes for great poems, and paintings.
2006-03-27