The Poem

This happens all too often where I am . . . on the one hand I hate to see it and on the other I can't seem to not watch. 

 

 

 

 

. . . it is the movement that achieves the form.

            Richard Howard, “Like Most Revelations”

 

  

Each day chooses how it will compose itself,

And this morning the poem is the movement

Of each thing into the one moment: the rain

Ending and running down the little runnels

Squirrels made between the pines, the dove

Leaping from a branch of the crabapple tree,

The springing arc of the red buds barely open

And the few fragile separate leaves unsettling

The light where the dark hovering hawk breaks 

Its circle and its silence, falling to the dove's

Rising, each a brief cry caught in the throat,

A furious flutter and then the sudden quiet,

Scatter of gray and white feathers tinged red,

Wind lifting each one gently into flight again.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-04-08 at 21:55

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a fine poem, Fog. It's well written, and its subject is timeless, but often avoided: everyday life is routinely savage.
2013-04-14


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
All I can write about this is that it is stirring introspective and compelling; another of your masterworks, my friend. You have the amazing knack of outdoing yourself time and again to the benefit of this and many other readers.

Thanks once more,

Joe
2013-04-11



It's hard to imagine a writer who could have expressed such a scene in such perfect form and language.
2013-04-09


Commentally Ill
does it say something about the character of most people that, given the same situation, we wouldn't avert our eyes?

i think that's why we're all so enthralled with reality tv. something about that kind of carnage we can't look away from.
2013-04-09



Beautifully and thoughtfully penned. Applauded.
2013-04-09