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l a n d s c a p e s fall down hill

between shadows and your eyes

have seen it before



Haiku by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2013-04-30 at 11:28

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
I like how you used the spaces at first, then crammed all the letters together (or typed normally, I should say), adding to the feeling of going downhill and causing a bit of speed to the reading. Nice.
2013-05-01



I really like this one. It's subtle yet powerful. There will be highs and lows, valleys to face as we move forward through life. Still, I can't help but shake the word-- Perhaps.
2013-05-01