Haiku

 

. . . all night there was only one

 

 

My loneliness too

In its unanswered love song

The last cicada

 

 

 

 





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-09-11 at 15:46

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Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
So much said with just a few words
Well done
Thanks for sharing
N T
2013-09-16


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm not normally a haiku fan, but yours is exceptionally well crafted, Fog.
2013-09-14


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Fog, your depth and passion are amazing! You put more into three lines than I do in 50. Well done!

Joe
2013-09-12


shells
Three lines of depth, simplicity and beauty.
2013-09-12



I agree with Rob. This invokes the best of classical Haiku as I know it.
2013-09-11


Rob Graber
A great, classical haiku!
2013-09-11