penfold18
Inside our shell we are safe but to step outside leaves us vunerable to all and sundry,take what you have as what may be for in your hands could be ecstasy, well written and enjoyed.
2006-04-12

Zoya Zaidi
"I need the soulkeeper close to me"
I like the term 'soulkeeper', unique!
Yeah, the etenal turmoil of, to be or not to be, always gnawing at your heart. Questioning disturbing.
((((hugs dear Malin)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-04-12

Lourdes
Enjoy the not-enjoying..
or maybe you already did, cause look at what came out of it!
(..I enjoyed it.)
2006-04-12

Mirage
Oh yeah, the restless battle of the mind,
going on and on!
"But I know I have to face the fear" - I think that is a key-line...
*smile of recognition"
2006-04-12

Jon Hanover
" Want to meet my beloved friends
have fun and do stuff
Where I am right now
just isn't enough "
Love that stanza.
2006-04-12

lastromantichero
hi there Malin i liked the poem very much it tells of a turmoil but i see light in your ability to express it

i found the rythm ok but then i tend to read poems like this slowly to get the mood set right well done rgds mike
2006-04-12

Troll
(are there still people who enjoy their days??)

(selfish lot!)

kiddin... what can i say? i know the feelings you're talking about all too well (or, at least, my version...)

war behind the scenes, that first line would be better without "inside this shell" - that should be a given, and it sucks the power from your words, your slamming words "it's a war behind the scenes" and that's how i'd really like to see you start it. just advice, take it or take it to the curb!

sorry for being longwinded,

~the big bad ugly Troll
2006-04-12