This is only a venting of the romantic ego.
I do have a Love of this person's spirit deeper than this plaint?



I Give

When all I have is all I give
And nothing more to win or lose
When you stay in place with your concrete grace
With your boat anchor boy like a hopeless toy you play
I asked you to leave 1001 times yet you stay and stay and stay
When a million years have come and gone away
And our custodial spirits sweep coffins full of stardust into tin cups of Time
Please remember this my friend of laughs of paths of coffee cups and rhymes
There was so much we could have been that never was to be
Just because, just oh well such things were never meant, you think?
So let's go on our ways live out our days apart, so cool, so what don't blink
Or you may miss me
Eventually,
And nothing more to win or lose
When all I have is all I give . . .




Poetry by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-05-30 at 14:27

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so powerful. It's meaning protracts from the normal style limits and gets away with it so well. Bravo.
2015-06-01


arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
Tremendous feeling, consistent-unified-building up to its climax. A very engaging read ☺
2015-05-30