| Dreamin'
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2007-04-05
Wow - here you are even using rhymes. Amazing..
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| Angry/Emotional
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2007-04-05
Nice text, after necessary corrections. Really gives you the creeps this one.
You should seek help if you are actually doing this.
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| Ode to a Fantasy...
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2007-04-05
I have some difficulties understanding this text as well. I'm like: who is this he-guy.. Seems like a mean boyfriend or a father-figure - I can't figure it out..
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| What It Does to Me...
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2007-04-05
Bumpy? Haha, that last line made me laugh. Was I supposed to?
Really nice display of your feelings towards music. Dare I ask what kind of music that inspired this? Is this he-guy, with the amazing voice and all someone special? Or is he an artist in a more general sence?
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| Some Sort of Sex
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2007-04-05
I do not normally "do" erotica, but I must admit I liked this piece. So innocent, angelic almost...
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| Crying With A Smile
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2007-04-05
How sweet, sad and innocent!
But I must say, I feel compelled to tell you that no life, even yours, is a waiste.
Keep up the good writing :)
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