| The art of non-doing
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2015-08-04
Stunning. Graceful as ever and very profound. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| Animal
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2015-08-04
A piece of protest and moral. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| Rue Das Nicht
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2015-07-31
I love the imagery. I love the repetition. This is a true gem. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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John.
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| hunger
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2015-07-30
Intriguing structuring and rendering of perspectives. This is clever and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| the sea's dark diatribe rolls
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2015-07-30
Stunning use of poetic device, especially the alliteration. Another gem of a poem, Bob. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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John.
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| The Zorro circle
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2015-07-30
Very, very good. Such potency and refinement. I am most impressed with this piece. *applaud*
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John.
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| Forever Friends
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2015-07-30
The rhyming is perfect and the sentiment is heart warming. If I could offer some criticism, it would be that you have used text speak for 'through' in L3. It stems the flow a little. Thanks for sharing!
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John.
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| The Keeper of Friendship
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2015-07-30
Very charming indeed.
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John.
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| Ethereal
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2015-07-24
Stunning imagery. A gem of a poem. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| Axiom
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2015-07-24
Stunning use of vocabulary. Thanks for the education and the picturesque telling. Axiom is a beautiful word.
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John.
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| The Ghost
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2015-07-24
Poignant, haunting, and somewhat romantic. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| INSIDE (with thanks to PrincesesBon)
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2015-07-21
Indeed. A strong concept, full of actuality. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| A Short Twist Of Bitters
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2015-07-21
I really admire your use of poetic device, especially the internal rhyming and alliteration. You are a wordsmith. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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John.
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| okay fine
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2015-07-21
The brevity here is very good. It says what it needs to say.
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John.
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| Innocence
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2015-07-21
I admire the structuring here. It brings prominence to the character. The innocence lost is very powerful, and it comes across very genuine. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| Backhanded compliment?
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2015-07-21
Astute. Insightful. Full of morality.
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John.
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| Looking for a reason
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2015-07-21
An interesting premise. Thought provoking.
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John.
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| If Lady Izumi Had Written An Etheree
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2015-07-21
A gem of a poem. You have done the form justice. It is picturesque, articulate, and emotional. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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John.
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| your beauty's glitter
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2015-06-30
Rather quite stunning. I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| A good day
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2015-06-30
A lovely and light hearted piece which is actually quite nostalgic. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| Vision of Heaven
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2015-06-15
A very clever extended metaphor. You certainly paint a picture. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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John.
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| han shan says
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2015-06-15
Certainly a hard feat. A very intriguing concept though....
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John.
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| timing is everything
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2015-06-15
So convincing and gracefully penned. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| High Tide
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2015-06-15
Interesting. It is a dynamic write and very efficacious. Well done. A fantastic piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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John.
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| echoes
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2015-06-15
Rather astute, actually. We all see ourselves in people - that is the root of sagacity and maturity. A strong piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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John.
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| Refugee Soul
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2015-06-13
Very topical indeed. A strong piece of literature. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| The Evangelical and the Skeptic
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2015-06-13
I love the character to this, and I love the witty tone. You are a wordsmith. Thanks for sharing.
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John.
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| Footy
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2015-06-13
I admire the link between music and football. It is certainly original and rather expressive. I love the reference to John Lee Hooker. Genius, really. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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John.
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| -30
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2015-06-13
Very picturesque. You write so beautifully, so articulate. I enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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John.
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| BRITAINS NATIONAL BIRD - THE CUTE ROBIN!
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2015-06-13
I love the narrative, Ken. An interesting concept....
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John.
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| PoetBay is 10 years old!
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2015-05-27
I shall drink to you all. I hope we will all be here in another ten years. You make the internet a better place to be.
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John.
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| Press
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2014-10-07
A very intriguing and articulate piece of literature.
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John.
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| A story
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2014-10-06
I agree with Ashe. The realism is a pleasure to read.
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John.
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| (Love) You Are
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2014-10-06
The extended metaphor worked perfectly and was very refreshing. The sentiment is hard hitting. Thankyou for sharing this with us.
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John.
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| In the eyes of others & ...
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2014-10-04
Profound....
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| Uncle Ikey's Last Words #44
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2014-10-02
Thought provoking and philosophical.
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John.
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| Two to tango
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2014-10-02
It has a bitterness however subtle. I enjoyed the couplet style and the sincere sentiment. Thankyou for sharing.
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John.
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| Princess Spell
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2014-10-02
Enchanting.
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| Craving
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2014-09-30
Such crisp rhyming and cogent sentiment. This poem holds so much strength. Thankyou for sharing.
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John.
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| I'M NOT WHITE! I'M BEIGE!
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2013-08-19
I admire the depth and the simplicity. A poem of voice. Thankyou for sharing. *applaud*
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John.
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| Dear reader
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2013-08-14
Beautifully graceful. This is lovely. *applaud*
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John.
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| Scent of Oranges
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2013-08-14
A piece filled with sentiment and nostalgia. I enjoyed this. Thankyou for sharing. *applaud*
Regards,
John.
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| The two
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2013-08-13
How alluring. Sounds nice. *applaud*
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John.
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| To Protect You
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2013-08-13
I admire the level of sincerity. A raw and powerful poem. Thankyou for sharing this with us. *applaud*
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John.
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| i Corals
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2013-05-27
This is very intriguing and expressive! Thankyou for sharing.
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John.
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| simplicity
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2013-04-20
An astute piece of literature.
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John.
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| oo
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2013-04-20
A very comical Limerick. Well done. *applause*
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John.
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| life calling
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2013-04-17
An intriguing concept!
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John.
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| Epicenthure
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2013-04-16
I think we can always be a little more aware. A powerful piece. Thankyou for sharing. *applaud*
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John.
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| Bridge
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2013-04-15
I love Fractal poetry. It is a difficult form. I like the sense of understanding here, shells. A powerful poem. Thankyou for sharing. *applaud*
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John.
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