imbalance
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2023-05-30 When things go well.
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scare
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2023-05-23 You convey your panic ably.
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Blessed Space
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2023-05-23 You nailed this one, Thomas. What graceful writing.
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Steam
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2023-05-19 Nice, a refreshing perspective on something we see all the time.
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muse assistants
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2023-05-19 Disturbing! Nice writing.
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S W E D I S H .......?
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2023-05-13 Two fair questions. One hundred years ago, I easily could have found someone around here who could teach me Swedish or Danish or Norwegian. Not anymore. Now, I’m lucky to find someone who's good at English.
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Mirabeau by Guillaume Apollinaire
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2023-05-10 Nicely done, Thomas. Apparently, you're not the one you wrote about who was allergic to Apollinaire.
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Three Sides of One (Being): Corrected!
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2023-05-09 An interesting lap around the notion of identity.
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Picket Fence
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2023-05-09 Plastic fences are all the rage around here. You're right that they're ugly to begin with, and they're not immune to the forces of nature. Like wooden fences, they deteriorate, but they are not picturesque as they do.
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Songs On The Voices Of Birds. A Poet In His Youth, And The Cuckoo-Bird.
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2023-05-08 It’s not really very good, but it has a slightly endearing delirious weirdness.
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living in a meridian world
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2023-05-07 Some fun word play here.
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heartless
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2023-05-07 Life is a cruel, zero-sum process.
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Fridge over troubled waters
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2023-05-07 Brilliant title!
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Genderless, Uncaring Nature
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2023-05-07 True enough. If you make your living from the land and the sky, you're at their mercy.
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Cinders
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2023-05-07 This is wonderful, Elle. It’s very sad to look at old photographs, knowing what was to come.
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Quick Coucou
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2023-05-06 Great news. When you have more to say, we're here.
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Lent 1992
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2023-05-04 I'm intrigued by the line breaks.
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Poet bay
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2023-05-03 I agree. Not many people seem to be coming around lately.
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Rather the Point
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2023-05-03 I know that feeling well.
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Walking Between the Raindrops
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2023-05-01 A fine snapshot.
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come and get it
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2023-04-26 Nicely done.
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THE MIRROR NEVER LIES
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2023-04-25 I agree. It seems best to avoid mirrors, and continue being that "indeterminate age." Doing so allows one to continue to curse those doddering fossils who clog store aisles and streets.
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Okay Day
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2023-04-24 Fine wordplay.
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An Afternoon in 1984
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2023-04-22 And poignant.
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At the Pond
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2023-04-20 Sounds like a most enjoyable show.
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A Box for Black Paul
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2023-04-18 Nicely done, Sameen. Very amusing. Your family must be more devout than mine. I don't even know where my grandparents are buried.
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two poems
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2023-04-17 Very nice.
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Spring in War Time
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2023-04-17 Excellent.
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G O D return - 2.0
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2023-04-15 Excellent point.
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Lost Trade and Quiet Dignity
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2023-04-13 A fine vignette.
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TIME FOR A PANEGYRIC
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2023-04-11 You have honored the man, Allen.
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Oh perfect Day
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2023-04-11 A pleasantly graceful description of a day spent gracefully.
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Witches
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2023-04-11 Well written, Thomas. I hear faint echoes of another Thomas, your revered Dylan, in this. The third line is dynamite.
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Surprise
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2023-04-06 Life is full of surprises, some good, some not good. Congratulations!
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Kobe beef syndrome
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2023-04-04 There's a lesson to be learned here: those who put you at ease eventually may consume you.
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Unsent Letter
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2023-04-04 We know what we ought to do. We don't do it. Nicely written, Thomas.
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80 and april
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2023-04-04 Sometimes, there's great satisfaction in doing something which needs to be done.
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MUSHROOM LESSONS
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2023-04-03 An interesting meditation. Sometimes, these are set off by the simplest things.
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1827; Or, The Poet's Last Poem
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2023-04-03 Hmm. It seems that things haven't changed much over the last 200 years. Fun poem!
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This
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2023-03-29 Agreed!
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An Angler’s Day
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2023-03-29 Fine writing, Joe.
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Saint Huck
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2023-03-29 Well done!
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From Her To Eternity
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2023-03-28 And now for something a little macabre.
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optimism versus pessimism
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2023-03-26 Well said.
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reverse thesis
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2023-03-26 Wherever they came from, the billionaires all end up living in the US or western Europe. They don't need to move to a poor country to make it rich. They just have to move their factories.
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listening to the carmell jones quartet on a rainy day
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2023-03-25 Who's to say that your time could be better spent?
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tell me what madness is...
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2023-03-23 We cannot be this person, so we cannot know what he perceives.
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The Lonely Sentinals
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2023-03-20 Nicely done, Joe.
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Daffodils
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2023-03-17 I usually don't like haikus, but this one succeeds. It says all that needs to be said, and does so artfully. Well done, Dougie.
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Future Poetry
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2023-03-15 A dopey poem, nicely rhymed.
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