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2025-06-13
Now, here's something to ponder. Well done.
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| Ramblings 665
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2025-05-31
I agree.
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| Dear Olivier,
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2025-05-28
It sounds like you found a genuinely helpful therapist. Based on what I've experienced, you are lucky.
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| Big Mac
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2025-05-27
I've seen it happen numerous times.
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| blonde hair/spaghetti straps
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2025-05-23
A familiar name. This one leaves me wondering.
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| A Caution to Poets
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2025-05-19
Most of the time.
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| Excitement
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2025-05-19
As they say here in Nebraska, "giddy up!"
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| NOW THEIR'S ALONE
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2025-05-19
A good metaphor, well presented.
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| rocky sonnet
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2025-05-13
Forgive me, but I think that this is a pleasantly flinty poem.
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| Old Song
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2025-05-10
I used to modify song lyrics for my kids all the time. One example: "When the moon hits your eye, you'll go blind and you'll die." With "America," I replaced "God shed His grace on thee" with "Good sheds don't come for free."
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| The Red Hat
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2025-05-06
Fine, subtle rhyming.
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| The Prison Cell
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2025-05-05
"I...hear the first line of this text." That's how it always begins, isn't it?
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| I hear the sparse traffic
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2025-05-04
Nicely done. "Rivulet of sound" is a fine description, and, yes, we need the birds.
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| Youth And Calm
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2025-04-28
There's an off-putting tick-tock facility to this poem, as is the case with nearly all British poetry written between 1650 and 1900.
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| Don't look up
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2025-04-28
A sad state of affairs.
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| Spring
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2025-04-25
Hooray!
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| Written in Response to Pensive Solitude on The Eve of This Night Revisited
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2025-04-25
Nicely done.
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| Here
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2025-04-22
Or perhaps "here" is everywhere and "now" is always.
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| A Glimpse
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2025-04-21
Outstanding! Whitman was both the pioneer and master of free verse.
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| an ending
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2025-04-21
A grim fate we all face very nicely described.
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| Seriously
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2025-04-18
Aren't there laws against that sort of thing? No one should have to put up with it.
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| Her Voice
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2025-04-18
Nailed it! Well done.
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| Dear Poetfriend
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2025-04-13
You have.
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| Lesson 70
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2025-04-11
I know that feeling. Sometimes, as I drive past a house, I wonder what it must be like to be one of the people who lives in it. I never will. So much can't be grasped.
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| LIFE... IS A BOX OF BITS
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2025-04-09
Interesting.
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| Hard to Believe
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2025-04-08
It's a pandemic.
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| Below Siehtagas
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2025-04-08
Some fine imagery here.
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| Lesson 69
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2025-04-08
Good one.
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| Lesson 68
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2025-04-08
It's tough, being a piece of gunk.
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| Options (follow-up)
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2025-04-08
That sounds like good idea.
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| NOT HOLDING HANDS
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2025-04-06
The last two lines leave me wondering. Has she moved on?
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| ONLY
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2025-04-02
Very nice, an interesting reminiscence.
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| Constant
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2025-04-02
A fair question, but a sad one.
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| Angles
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2025-03-26
Very nice.
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| Will It Swirl, Will I See It Dance?
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2025-03-26
A fine meditation.
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| A PLACE OF TRIAGE
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2025-03-25
Something to hope for.
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| The Party
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2025-03-24
There's an appealing starkness to this.
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| Rain on Red Earth
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2025-03-22
This is wonderfully descriptive. You put me there.
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| Casse-toi pas la tête, Issy
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2025-03-22
I can imagine. Congratulations.
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| Oh Boy
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2025-03-22
When you're done, you'll tell yourself that you had no reason to be so worried.
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| Sonnet II*
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2025-03-17
A bit chewy, but worth the effort. The Elizabethans were, without question, the greatest English language poets ever.
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| Reflections IV
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2025-03-15
No one should tell you to move past such misfortunes, but it's amazing and very enjoyable to know that you've been able to come to grips with them.
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| Reflections III
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2025-03-15
Agreed.
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| Happy Ending!
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2025-03-12
Wonderful!
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| A Bit Perplexing
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2025-03-09
How peculiar. You have to wonder.
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| Reflections II
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2025-03-09
An interesting meditation. I wonder how different your life now would seem if your childhood had progressed in the opposite fashion.
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| Afterlife
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2025-03-03
Great finish!
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| artificiAlly intellIgent
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2025-03-03
Not so different from the creatures who programmed it, eh?
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| Count That Day Lost
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2025-03-03
Interesting rhyme pattern. Well done.
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| No Worries
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2025-03-01
Independence is a thing to be cherished, not willingly surrendered.
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