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Donald Thornton

76 years old from USA


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Marriage vow to A

2011-07-14
Great rhyme and meter I like this one a lot.


Cover To Cover

2011-07-09
Cleverly written and I like it!


Precious

2011-07-09
To all that liked this poem, in it's original write the last stanza was different from what is placed here it said Line two: The greastest love and Peace, and line four read: My dearest love, Denise.
but was changed to make the poem fit all not just one name.


Influx.

2011-07-04
I would of liked to see what you seen when you wrote this.


Flying Words

2011-07-04
I do sayings, so I like this but I'd say a wise man, like God, can see from the in-side-out, their transparency is reflective and what's in the reflections is very Spiritual.


Rivulet of crystal.

2011-07-04
This poem seems different to me than most I have read, I do like it, not sure I totally understand it all.


Nothingness

2011-07-02
I think I have been here before, great poem.


Welcome to the Jungle..

2011-06-30
I understand this poem very well, thanks very much.


Are you there?

2011-06-30
This was quite good thanks for the write.


No way back

2011-06-15
This one is quite good from my point of view, thanks lots.


MUHAMMAD IS A CLOSEST PERSON TO GOD!

2011-06-15
Sorry I can't read this poem, but I tried.


Body and Soul

2011-06-14
I liked all of this poem that I could read which wasn't too much.


I Need Somebody

2011-06-12
This poem was cool.


Friendship

2011-06-12
Well put, and frendship is a form of love.


Privacy

2011-06-10
Grand write, it tells of your place and time, and how you feel about it.


Cui Bono?

2011-06-10
I was once told that Life even at its worse is still much better than death. great write.


Yaks

2011-06-10
I like this, one reason is I have a book that explains Yaks, its called the Oahspe and Yaks are a race of man in the early creation peroid. Great.


Live and let live, and maby walk on

2011-06-09
Nice write, kind of sexy to me.


In That Moment

2011-06-09
I related this thought to my inner power of feeling, where the love most haven't found, is, and it relates well, great, Thanks.


Forever Love

2011-06-09
You know its not mind because it don't rhyme, but I thought it was good so I put it here for others to view.


For Liam

2011-06-08
I bet Liam liked this, I know I would if my name came up with that much caring, Cool


Not the Blues Song

2011-06-08
I find it has quieting qualities, very good write.


Consciousness

2011-06-08
This process starts in the early times of unseen chemical reactions, as did we all and everything.


Eternal Rain

2011-06-07
Simply great, feelings that has past my way in life.


Graveyard pray

2011-06-06
And that's because it will all be said, and not that your dead, but you took your stroll, to God's little knoel.
Great write, see what it made me do?


Pilgrimage

2011-06-06
The was set like a forest documentary, and I love nature so it was just great for me to read, good write.


Shine for me

2011-06-05
Super write.


Hope

2011-06-04
Fantastic! I don't think I'd change a thing.


Words

2011-06-03
I keep a daily journal and have since mid 80's


Reading Town

2011-06-03
I can relate to this poem life is much the same in each era.


Ash of Day

2011-06-03
Reminds me of my child hood.


Words

2011-06-01
Words are tools, good ones if used properly.


Caroline

2011-06-01
This echos sounds from my past, good write


Tainted hearts

2011-05-31
This is that Love that waxs cold, its all over the place.


Enchantment

2011-05-31
Is this a mental harvest?


Gone

2011-05-31
Which time?


Onwards

2011-05-30
This poem tells Truth, whats more, this is a dimension from the last life!


She was waiting

2011-05-27
My question is (was it worth it?) Great write.


Svitjod

2011-05-27
I could almost dance to it.


The opinion you have of others makes

2011-05-24
A very worldly statement, and I seem to understand it. Good write.


Stassia

2011-05-24
I like this poems rhythm and meter, cute story.


A discourse by Two Mortal Enemies Whose Wish Is Peace

2011-05-23
It says a lot in such few words!


Even the Hill Has No Name

2011-05-23
This tells quite a story, it reminds me when I lived in Kansas. good write


spring in Beijing

2011-05-23
This is so cool.


In A Bad Way

2011-05-22
I feel your mistrust with this world, life, and Thoughts, but well expressed. Great write.


Facts Of Life

2011-05-22
I'd give this write a Blue Ribbon, yes I would.


Metaphoric Juxtaposition*click* Riddle?Come

2011-05-09
I just loved this write, the wheel to me is the never ending path, the rat is the thinking soul, and to survive it must go backwards to where the path started.


Middle-Class

2011-05-01
Your poem hit home with me, thanks so much for the write.