Donald Thornton

2011-07-14
Great rhyme and meter I like this one a lot.

2011-07-09
Cleverly written and I like it!

2011-07-09
To all that liked this poem, in it's original write the last stanza was different from what is placed here it said Line two: The greastest love and Peace, and line four read: My dearest love, Denise.
but was changed to make the poem fit all not just one name.

2011-07-04
I would of liked to see what you seen when you wrote this.

2011-07-04
I do sayings, so I like this but I'd say a wise man, like God, can see from the in-side-out, their transparency is reflective and what's in the reflections is very Spiritual.

2011-07-04
This poem seems different to me than most I have read, I do like it, not sure I totally understand it all.

2011-07-02
I think I have been here before, great poem.

2011-06-30
I understand this poem very well, thanks very much.

2011-06-30
This was quite good thanks for the write.

2011-06-15
This one is quite good from my point of view, thanks lots.

2011-06-15
Sorry I can't read this poem, but I tried.

2011-06-14
I liked all of this poem that I could read which wasn't too much.

2011-06-12
This poem was cool.

2011-06-12
Well put, and frendship is a form of love.

2011-06-10
Grand write, it tells of your place and time, and how you feel about it.

2011-06-10
I was once told that Life even at its worse is still much better than death. great write.

2011-06-10
I like this, one reason is I have a book that explains Yaks, its called the Oahspe and Yaks are a race of man in the early creation peroid. Great.

2011-06-09
Nice write, kind of sexy to me.

2011-06-09
I related this thought to my inner power of feeling, where the love most haven't found, is, and it relates well, great, Thanks.

2011-06-09
You know its not mind because it don't rhyme, but I thought it was good so I put it here for others to view.

2011-06-08
I bet Liam liked this, I know I would if my name came up with that much caring, Cool

2011-06-08
I find it has quieting qualities, very good write.

2011-06-08
This process starts in the early times of unseen chemical reactions, as did we all and everything.

2011-06-07
Simply great, feelings that has past my way in life.

2011-06-06
And that's because it will all be said, and not that your dead, but you took your stroll, to God's little knoel.
Great write, see what it made me do?

2011-06-06
The was set like a forest documentary, and I love nature so it was just great for me to read, good write.

2011-06-05
Super write.

2011-06-04
Fantastic! I don't think I'd change a thing.

2011-06-03
I keep a daily journal and have since mid 80's

2011-06-03
I can relate to this poem life is much the same in each era.

2011-06-03
Reminds me of my child hood.

2011-06-01
Words are tools, good ones if used properly.

2011-06-01
This echos sounds from my past, good write

2011-05-31
This is that Love that waxs cold, its all over the place.

2011-05-31
Is this a mental harvest?

2011-05-31
Which time?

2011-05-30
This poem tells Truth, whats more, this is a dimension from the last life!

2011-05-27
My question is (was it worth it?) Great write.

2011-05-27
I could almost dance to it.

2011-05-24
A very worldly statement, and I seem to understand it. Good write.

2011-05-24
I like this poems rhythm and meter, cute story.

2011-05-23
It says a lot in such few words!

2011-05-23
This tells quite a story, it reminds me when I lived in Kansas. good write

2011-05-23
This is so cool.

2011-05-22
I feel your mistrust with this world, life, and Thoughts, but well expressed. Great write.

2011-05-22
I'd give this write a Blue Ribbon, yes I would.

2011-05-09
I just loved this write, the wheel to me is the never ending path, the rat is the thinking soul, and to survive it must go backwards to where the path started.

2011-05-01
Your poem hit home with me, thanks so much for the write.