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raven

31 years old from USA


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My Profound Secret

2006-06-26
i love it its well expressed great job


Please just leave me

2006-06-26
your poem is beautiful and i can say i know how you feel


Message to The Devil!!!!!!

2006-06-26
this poem is so kewl i love the way you use the devil and god and it is so true you have god and thats all the strength you need LOVE THE POEM.


I MAKE YOU HAPPY

2006-06-26
this poem like your others is very beautiful
i just love the way you always catch a strong emotion and you make the reader feel it your poem is amazing.


Why

2006-06-26
why the one question we wish we could be answered but the truth is does it help to know or does it make it harder.


"One Night(Love Knight, The Charmed One, and ark Angel)"

2006-06-26
i love the poem you all are so right alot can happen in one night keep up the good work


my most recent

2006-06-26
wow! befoer i met josh i fell in love with my best friend a chic but i couldnt do it because i didnt want to hurt her because she was my best friend so i told her it wouldnt work before she fell for meto hard


horrible things..

2006-06-26
i know how you feel before i met josh i was in a similar situation. the truth of the matter is words hurt but they dont define us.


ONLY YOU CAN...(Love Knight and Love Angel)

2006-06-26
this poem is beautiful i honestly LOVE it the way yall write to or about each other is amazing and that brings a smile to my face.


Separated But Together

2006-06-23
me and my love have recently been seperated by distance and our hearts are always together


I AM LOVE'S FOOL

2006-06-23
if your a fool for love im the queen of fools because i follow love as if the only way to go so if loving is foolish then id rather be foolish.


Our Happy Tears

2006-06-23
your poem is beautiful you right with such care and such feeling your emoyions come out in the poem! beautiful!.


Broken Heart

2006-06-23
your poem is so true every thing is better when you dont have a brioken heart


I need you to survive

2006-06-23
love knight was right you do have some beautiful poems about love this poem is amazing i know how you feel


Young Love

2006-06-23
young love is just as strong as any other and age is merely a number if you truely love some one it wont matter keep up the love.


I couldn't stop smiling

2006-06-23
i finally got over someone recently so congrats i know its a hard thing to do . love the poem.


I've becomed this girl I don't want to be.

2006-06-23
i know what you mean i have 13 scars from cutting i hated doing it and im really glad that i quit but life still gets hard sometimes and thats hard to cope with when you take away the cutting but dont worry you have a friend here who understands. dont become the person you fear ive been there and its really hard to bounce back from i didnt want to become one of those either and then i did and the only thing that brought me back was 2 good friends and one wonderfull boyfriend. **hugs**


without you, I don't want to breath

2006-06-23
these words sound relatively familiar to the ones i said to my boyfriend not to long ago he moved to wisconsin and i cried for several days. i would have followed him any where if i could.


I love everything about you

2006-06-23
theres this boy that i cant find one thing i dont like about him and i love that hes sweet ,funny,smart,atheletic,and most of all hes mine.


I'm dead ..

2006-06-23
your poem rocked . and your english is pretty good so keep up the good work


Tears are comming from my eyes

2006-06-23
i know how you feel about a love thats over but not goneand this is an awesome poem.


I scared you away

2006-06-23
saying we care is hard enough and for us to scare them by it is even harder your writing is real to any one whos afraid to show there true feelings.


My life

2006-06-23
you know im 14 as well and i seem to feel the exact same way you do and its really cool to find someone who knows what im going through.i really love what you wrote