| I SAW AN ANGEL
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2011-10-07
I really enjoyed the description here, it really brought me into the moment. thank you.
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| A Poem (in response to Ars Poetica)
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2011-06-26
what A perfect response. the "being" of this write is exactly on point and my experience of it is refreshing and thank you for that!
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| Finding the Missing Link
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2007-06-28
if the zelda series had a theme poem, this would be it. and that says alot coming from a fan as big as me. great job.
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| Babe, Babe, Babe!
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2007-05-15
this is one of those writes that takes a hold of you and reminds you of the reason people search for love. hold on to that honesty, that passion of the heart because most people get it sucked out of them eventually. its really beautiful though and the poem *bookmarked*
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| In Folly's Cocoon
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2006-12-23
great job of capturing a thought we all get sometimes. boy i can relate and this is a really awesome poem *bookmarked*
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| I love you
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2006-10-31
wow, you expressed the emotion so well. it was like candy for the heart. :)
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| Time waits for no man
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2006-10-30
wow, that was very good, and very wise. sounds like you made the right choice.
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| Iceburned
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2006-08-15
uhhh...that was good...i dont exactly feel good after reading it but i certainly feel sometihng....im sorry whatevers happened/happening im here if you need someone to talk to...oohhh good poem. melancholy, but good.
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| To know or not to know
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2006-08-15
that reminds me of something that i cant really remember...it goes something like this "there is only wisdom in knowing that you know nothing" or something like that...anyway i like this it reminds me of things ive thought about
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| Love: And as incredible as it might be
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2006-08-15
hey i like this alot. the last line really hits home....and its so true.
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| I Shall Come To You, My Love
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2006-08-04
i dont know what it is about sonnets that make them so special to me. i like this one alot, its easy to relate to
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| I WAS NEVER GONE
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2006-07-28
i like this i can identify with the message of this poem....or at least what i interpret the message to be
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| The Gentleman
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2006-07-25
everything you write is so captivating. your poetry brings me to a place ive never been....im peering through a window into your soul. ior something deep like that :P but seriously you are a great writer and this poem is truly great. this is the first one ive bookmarked. gosh.
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| I need
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2006-07-19
here it! second comment! dum dum oh damn it wont let me...oh well. rating=20!
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| I need
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2006-07-19
wow that was really powerful.....so good im going to comment twice to give a rating worthy of this poem :p
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| i apoligise
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2006-07-09
nice write. simple but profound.
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| Invisible Wounds
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2006-07-09
simply perfect. theres naught else to say.
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| I've Seen That Look Before
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2006-07-08
meloncholy. it moved me.
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| I Wouldn't Do It
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2006-07-08
safety doesnt last, cuts bleed for i litle while, the pain subsides reasonably quickly.....but the scars last forever. however, every step, nook, and cranny of life is covered in sharp thorns and sharper blades. you cant just sit in a corner because youre afraid to get cut.
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| I've got mixed feelings about you
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2006-07-08
i dont really know what to say except thats good...i can relate to it.
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