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The latest comments that EmelÚn has written.

gently

2013-06-13
What a refreshing and sweet (like finding the best candypiece in an assumed empty goodiebag) write, made me laugh!
You do indeed have a splendid hang of this poetry thing.


More from Uncle Ikey #20

2012-06-13
I heart uncle Ikey. I would buy a really large car just to fit his bumpersticker.


Iceberg

2012-06-09
Even icebergs wear down.
This poem speaks directly and undresses the core of the very human spot we often keep to ourself. It also leaves familiar images of familiar feelings, and you convey these complicated matters so beautifully simple. Its art.


Ask

2009-06-30
scary funny scary


55

2009-06-30
a punk happy birthday choir is sent your way to shake your bones :)


Banished

2009-06-29
(Im hiding from the crossfire on this page in these safe brackets. I cant help but to like this rap,, it is a rap isnt it? I feel like im in some shady weird club watching a mic battle between two guys in winged and horned costumes. Kinda fun, and yes.. you're not bad, not bad at all... now pass the mike to the darker one) tapping my foot


GIVE A STRNGER A SMILE , A REASON TO LAUGH!

2009-06-29
you are my kinda guy ...hehehe.
A bubbly fantastic text that leaves every reader (oh yes, if you are not eaten up by some outerspace-blackness of soul) with a huge smile that (ok, in my case) will last a week ..and then some.
Next time you go to Tesco I want to sit in that shopping cart among the ketchup's and the silly hats :)) Thanks again for yet another uplifting text! You are so needed !


THE GREATEST OF ALL GIFT'S!

2009-06-29
this poem should be printed on huge posters and glued up on walls and sidewalks around the world.
A truth well served by you Ken. Loved.


The Movie

2009-06-25
you describe the deepest coloures of one-of-those-days with an easyness that makes it all flow into the readers brain like we were just there ... with coke on our shoes.
now _Thats something.


Last Breath

2009-06-24
I really liked this. Its form made it flow, made the reader take small breaks to breathe and absorb. Which is needed, because the imagery is so strong in its complex simplicity.
And since gloom is my middle name how can I not but love this.
Bravo.


Sun Shines Through Midnight Clouds

2009-06-24
but chin up at least you're not dying __
hehe hehe,, you bring sunshine sunshine :))


Back on the bay..

2009-06-24
we are alike like that then, you and I.
enjoyed your write :)


Sonnet 8 (The Wanderer's thoughts)

2009-06-23
my Sir, this is grandiose.
Again you leave me
mouth open


Just something

2009-06-21
so true

but someone would like to hear the story
so we paint


What is Born of Pastel Dawn

2009-06-21
I got lost in that wave, woke up and just didn't get it


Dream Man

2009-06-20
I found me one of those.
You described it well.


Willow Tree

2009-06-20
and I want you to be the one to waltz with me,,
and how you write the complications away like I never knew they ever existed!


La Vida Mia/My Life

2007-07-05
i finalmente estas aqui !

bien venido ,
con este poema de maravilla


Reality

2007-05-19
the c - word ??
and who cares if you like spain or not lady


I Have Heard It Said by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-22
right ... since you re old .. like that's a valid excuse Mr
Get a grip


You Are So Easy On The Eye by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-22
mooaaahhaahhhaaaa


You Are So Easy On The Eye by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-22
stay away from her you pervert


funeral party

2007-01-26
you always make magic , even out of midnights you create rainbows .


Please Dont Tell Your Mother by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-19
yuk .., you bet I will tell her !!
hehe


An Unborn Angel by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-12
yes. God keep her safe !
And you , my hero , are truly an amazing poet and friend .
This poem breathes with both beauty and life . I pray this tiny girl do the same . Gracias , por t├│do que usted haces ; tu cari├▒o y tus piensamientos. Te ad├│ro .


The Wrangler And The lady ( Victoria's secret) by M.A.Meddings

2006-12-12
never cared for blondes but this poem makes the blond a little bit less boring . Great work .


What is Christmas?

2006-12-01
I go waldorf every christmas and then I wish I had hay coloured hair , but I dont .


miranda

2006-12-01
wow . I enjoyed every movement in this text and how the last pun left me stripped of every room of yours , like something freshly ploughed me with an Annie Proulx harvesting machine.
Great work .


age

2006-12-01
I took a dive into this write and I will stay here for some time
with only the surfacing bubbles of your wisdom to reveal my presence


Roses in November

2006-11-23
I meant a beautiful response to m y poem .. (Sometimes I talk of myself in third person and that can sound a bit weird) . There is a soothing continuation in this poem and I am deeply honoured by your response .


Roses in November

2006-11-23
this is a very good acrostic poem and a beautiful response to EmelÚns poem. the images here are bountiful and magical.


In sickness and in health

2006-11-21
I hate villanelles. This one is perfect . I quit .


Tethered tears

2006-11-21
it is not a misspell . It is one plea , two pleas . Apostrophes tend to ruin a poems good looks like this one _ which is a beauty .


Mi Corazon By M.A.Meddings

2006-11-21
de quien hablas, Clint?
Poema preciosa.. y t˙ corazon tambÝşen Se˝or.


You are my Angel

2006-11-21
A beautiful and wisefull acrostic , how can I not but love it ? Your girlfriend is a lucky woman .
Great job !


sweetheart fun beat!

2006-11-21
hmm , this sounds like a song ! Cool .


Long for you

2006-11-21
hate to break it to ya ... but it will fade .. nananananaa na .
beautiful poem though Colachick


father at terminus

2006-11-18
a kwansaba . You speak I listen Sir . Because this poem is in a class of itself .
bookmarked


There was never a time

2006-11-18
he he .. I love this write and refuse to soil that sentence with any lala .


A Moment (back on track)

2006-11-18
This is a beautiful moment shared . Your son is a blessed little boy because I know he knows your strong arms will always hold him . One day he will also know what a great poet his dad is as well !


Make It Count

2006-11-18
no one works out in poetry like you . this is another great session from a skilled poet !


Margaret lifted her dress

2006-11-18
and special is the after taste of this poem mm . Great job .. now I must read it again , just another bite . This is a poetic wonder-candy.


Cuddle ~ by BlueyedSoul and Saga

2006-11-18
this poem bring the most beautifully shaped snowflakes on a summerday .. they melt in my mouth like words from two very gifted poets , and the taste will even make Willy Wonka green with jealousy.


Stop All The Clocks a poem by W H Auden

2006-11-18
I know this poem well . It is one of my absolute favourite poems in english as well . Thanks for sharing it here .


Ephemeral Beauty by M.A.Meddings

2006-11-18
ahh , you truly are the last romantic hero and how blessed we are to know and to have you here . You give heart to this bay ! A lovely write from such a skilled poet and how can any woman resist this beautiful and humble write of forgiveness .


Congratulations Katherine By M.A.Meddings

2006-11-18
yes , she is wonderful ! and so is this newborn little Daisy-princess and so is your poem to them .


Sisters

2006-11-17
Ive said it before , I will say it again :
a sister is a sister is a sister in the end !

A touching piece , wonderfully written by skilled hands .


A Poem About A Pickle

2006-11-17
Tell my uncle Nelson he is my favourite flavoured pickle (-writer)!
You talented talented bunch .
Love you , precious wonderful adopted family of mine !!


From my window By M.A.Meddings

2006-11-17
only in a true poets garden grows a maple tree with such a story between its dying leaves


Labour Government

2006-11-16
You are a funny funny clever old man. Another dashing and smart little poem from your wrinkled hand but youthgreen mind . No wonder Lourdes loves you like she does . How come you two never got married back in the days ?