| HOSPITAL BLUES - 1
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2023-12-09
You'll make sense of it, somehow, not sure when, but you will x
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| songbird
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2023-11-22
I wonder, if you did one day reach the Emerald City, the "them of them," and you saw behind the wizard's curtain, that the allure would be no more. I mean, do you ever really know someone, or want to? Are we not sometimes happier with the mystery? I guess, if you're there throughout the lions and tigers and bears ( oh my!), and you fight off the flying monkeys, then at least you have shared history and common ground. You may even sing a common song?
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| unbidden
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2023-11-14
Purge it, in whichever way, if it tumbles thus, purge it
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| Save as Draft
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2023-11-07
Hilarious!
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| Portrait of S.
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2023-09-30
Oh, I aspire to have such poetry written about me.
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| shadow man
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2023-09-12
Reading it, is like applying a soothing balm , inhale, exhale, begin, dive in,transform, release.
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| SAW A WOMAN READING
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2023-07-30
Said the woman, to her self,
Begging soft,
Pleading quiet,
" Come, savage truth, from this page,..
Will you tempt? Is it courage? Is it love written here?
Can you soak me in a story yet unknown?"
( Or something like that?)
...........NEXT.......
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| A Fragile Life
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2023-07-30
I think ( thoughts being so delicate, as you say too), that reading this over and over, makes it more enjoyable. I'm sitting happily between the words, letting them filter through. I could write a technical breakdown, but, it is enough for me to say yes, this one, I like. Thank you
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| UNKNOWN READERS WORLD WIDE (Variation On A Thieme)
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2023-07-29
Yes, I have so much to thank poetry for.
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| Lumps
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2023-07-28
Buddy buddy system going on nicely there x
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| summer evening
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2023-07-28
There was a Turkish Delight advert, and this is what it would be in poetry
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| Stone
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2023-07-22
Well, I'm glad you did finish this one. It's a very humble poem, with a hopeful end. What could be more affirming than the promise of the sun coming up every morning?
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| IT'S A DOG VS CAT TYPE OF LIFE
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2023-07-22
Yes, I imagine they would, with their tongues hanging out, into the void .
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| summer rain
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2023-07-22
The dew point, pregnant, ready.
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| patience
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2023-07-13
Everything comes to he who waits.
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| I heard the silence
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2023-06-29
Gentle, soft and effortless. Love the quietness.
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| Ch. 36
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2023-06-28
Ooowf. An observation of modern relationship that has gone to term. Very very well observed.
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| AR-15
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2023-06-27
Sends chills just reading it. A difficult subject to tackle.
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| Fragment
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2023-06-27
I wonder if you wrote this from one of those places where Summer is feared, uncomfortable. It doesn't matter really, what matters is I believed it was. Thank you. But, seeing happiness amidst it all in a little harp.
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| Thunder
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2023-06-24
The magic and the fear, is all written in quick succession, and the unknown...love this moment written so beautifully
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| Unnatural Rhythms
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2023-06-24
Yes, whenever my time comes, i imagine a dance with death, I'm going out partying...probably after a zimmer frame race with my true friends.
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| THE HONEY BEE & THE HUMMINGBIRD
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2023-06-17
Oh I bet she does! Such a saucy write...ohhhhhhh, THAT'S why they call it the birds and bees.
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| Guavas
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2023-06-17
Hurrah! I love grandma. She's a lady boss, a subtle queen , teacher, guardian. Let us sit awhile in her company ( if we're allowed) and learn a thing or two about protecting our own.
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| At the end by Ann Wood
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2023-06-17
We all walk away with a wooden suit. That is an epic line. Thank you for reminding us to live every moment.
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| Three-Liners
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2023-06-17
Ooh I like these, they are like powershots of poetry, a quick fix for the reader to ingest and then allow to reach all poetry parched parts. Although, it is evident they are definately very considered. My favourite, for what it counts, is Yesteryear's verses.
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| the first cherries
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2023-06-15
Cherry pips, the start of a tree, like your ma and grandma, you, all part of the circle, the poem rhythm, start at the begining, ending at the start, everything in sync, the poem, the cycle, the family, very, very cleverly done
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| MEDICAL DILEMNA
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2023-06-15
It's the old problem, not enough time, too many Data analysts to accommodate, but yes, I can remember when I was small, you had a family doctor, who knew you, who you respected, who came to your home if you were sick, who cared beyond the confines of his desk. I can still smell the antiseptic of the waiting room. Dr Cheshire was our gp. Old school.
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| a dance not danced/a festival of two
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2023-06-11
One can't help but wondering what you might have said
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| Pi on a desk
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2023-06-11
Sure now yes, they've heard, after all, there is still the dawn chorus, the junction of gossip in the bird world.
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| 'BOLLOX CHOPS' JOHNSON - JUMPS! (An Addid Two Lines)
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2023-06-10
What dirt, does Boris have on people, that gives him such power to reinvent and come up smelling like roses?
I have a better idea.
Please Ken for PM, please, get up there and be the true voice of the people
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| Toby Falls in Love
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2023-06-09
Wooa, what,who too many references to keep up with, give us a starting point at least. I do however like Hilarions Asse, I plan to use that, at work, I know a few who fit the bill
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| twelfth night, awaiting
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2023-06-08
Welllll, this is rather delicious. All that promise in, what, 14 lines? But the last two wrap it up neatly and tie it with a perfect bow, laced in a perfume of salty ocean danger.
You can mic drop now and leave the stage.
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| gulf of california
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2023-06-08
And I am educated. Truly they should call her Pearl .
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| under the eaves
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2023-06-08
This reminds me of the beginnings of a Lewis Carrol, in some way, humanizing her, i see her more as an Alice in Wonderland character, sitting on top of a paper throne, with a golden paper crown, and a paper lace gown.
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| Sundry Notebook Jottings
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2023-06-05
Love it because, this is how I see the world too, I was beginning to think I was a bit odd, but, now I see, maybe lovers of words interact on a different level with the world, or maybe think a bit deeper or something, maybe journal keeping is a new idea . Thank you
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| dawn
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2023-06-04
I too love the morning, before anyone else is awake. You captured the spiritual interaction between human and nature, a salutation of sorts to the earth and it's fresh promise every morning.
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| Remembering love
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2023-06-02
Yes, you bet he thinks of you,and you can bet his new life isn't so perfect as it seems on the outside... In my opinion anyway x
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| muse assistants
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2023-05-19
Cat? Spider?...
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| Night Chant
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2023-05-15
This, is always my dream plan...or how I imagine my life to be.
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| A mom's Joy.
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2023-05-14
Beautifully conveyed.
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| Genderless, Uncaring Nature
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2023-05-07
I was just thinking the same about my garden. Sad about livelihoods, sad, sad, the fear of the extremes even worse.
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| 80 and april
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2023-04-05
I get it, I too was tackling the lawns, and enjoying the sun complementing my efforts.
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| This
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2023-03-29
One. We are. United we become better .
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| Daffodils
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2023-03-18
I thought our were late here too. Honestly, the daffodil and the snowdrop, two of my favourite flowers, so delicate yet so resilient
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