he died tonight
while the rain just kept on falling
as nothing had changed



goodbye



street is filled with rain tonight

drip. . . . . drip

from the hands of the garden

drip. . . . . drip

beauty in release

drip. . . . . .

drip

into space


I will never return

as you left me




Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-05-14 at 01:21

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Malin Johansson
A very sad poem in few lines... but yet so strong...Great work here.....
2006-05-14


Jon Hanover
Yet another powerful write. You say so much with so little.
2006-05-14


pia
that last line can be read in at least two ways I think ...You will never be the same now when he is gone but the rain just keeps falling as if nothing happened Your writing is so painfully beautiful...With love Pia
2006-05-14


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there

this is such a sad poem but i applaud the style and the way you develop the theme well done rgds mike
2006-05-14