every bowl has its stone

 

marketa puts a stone   one

from a walk we had taken 

into the raku bowl on the shelf 

 

a bowl does not like to be empty   she says

her accent gives me shivers

have i fallen in love with han shan   i wonder

 





Poetry by one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2017-05-04 at 17:42

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2017-05-18


Wumbulu
1st verse a gentle family snapshot. I find the 2nd scary (we can ignore the metaphysics) Really good.
2017-05-13


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
It sounds deep enough to be han shan. I understand why it made you wonder :)
2017-05-09


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Definitely an eastern inscrutable quality to this. Like it!
2017-05-07



As mysterious as it is lovely. Yes, definitely, you and marketa will make us read han shan yet.
Ashe
2017-05-05


Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely poem well done Jim
2017-05-05


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Now, I really want to read Han Shan.
2017-05-05


shells
This piece is both simple and intricate at the same time. I'll go and have a cuppa, I'm feeling chilly😉
2017-05-05


Dah
Love the way in which this is expressed.

Bravo Poet! ––))
2017-05-04