I wrote this because I didn't know what to write and my mind was kinda fuzzy... so this is what came out of it...


Knowing the start
but not the end
Lost at every
fork and bend
Never sure of
the right way
Just keep moving

Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-05-26 at 22:54

Tags Lost  Wander  Road 

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I love to wander....usually through trees and over mountains and across fields and valleys and streams and rivers and lakes and whatnot...

And up and down the downtown mall...

OK, sorry. But basically, what I'm trying to say is that this poem ROCKS!!!

say it sista!!
i agree with you 100 percent!!
(the fuzzier the mind the better! sometimes...)

This is great. I think it'd be even better if you added more verses, maybe even if you make it a narrative poem. I really like it... maybe its just my obsession with wandering though. ^_^ awesome.