Brushing up Against the Sun

Giving a nudge and a light caress
the breeze brushes up against the sun
A blush of sunshine warms the air
brightening the sparkling sky
They tell old stories and laugh in bursts
like friends that have lived forever
At dusk it’s time to say goodbye
They’ll meet again at sunrise.

Poetry by Hans Bump
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Written on 2021-04-24 at 21:16

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Yes, very good, Hans Bump. Very pleasant personifications and delightful descriptions overall. Thank-coos :>)

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done!

Am loving the personification in lines 5 and 6. Well done!

one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
You've described a perfect day, it brightened mine.

Love this romance of the skies.

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo, Hans. I love the lightness of this. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it!