Haiku response to Aliena´s Renga in lastromantichero´s challenge


Fear , fifth stanza


What is a heart
if not a muscle of my fear
arousing the ghost



Haiku by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-07-15 at 15:18

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Teala
This says so much, very nice write.
2006-07-29


Thomas Selnes The PoetBay support member heart!
Was going to comment this haiku challenge, but I must admit that this is the stanza that stood out. Those three lines managed to give me the chills. :)
2006-07-25


English War Veteran aged 98
which Ghost is this ? I hope it's not mine - as I do not have that long!
2006-07-17


Amanda Manmohan
Lourdes... once again you've managed to stun us all. Amazing write :)
2006-07-16


English War Veteran aged 98
Hmmmmmmmm, ??
2006-07-16


Arti
Oh wow... that is so awsomely beautiful... Just like your heart!
2006-07-15


pia
oh...you are so excellent ...yes love can be like that ...i feel like crying and smiling at the same time This is wonderful...Pia
2006-07-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow there to you this is just what we wanted to take it on well done rgds mike
2006-07-15