questions whispered in haiku-form for a weed in my garden


(Dear Weed)



(Your name is silent
but your heart , will it beat
if I kneel?)

(You have a home
and my eyes gives you a colour
but do you know?)

(You grow and bend
as the wind gives you a voice
but do you dream?)

(Or does it stop
when your sound reaches my arm
and you look asleep)

(Your name is silent
but your heart , will I find it
if I kill you?)



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-08-03 at 16:05

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Edna Sweetlove
You get a prize for the maximum nmber of brackets possible ()()()()()()())()()()()()(((()))((()))())))(()()))[][][]}{}{][]{][][}{}[]{})[
2006-10-02


Lourdes
Hey old bud .. Would you calm down?
No, I repeat NO , no such weed grow in my garden . That was in the good old days sweet friend .. So don't you come visit me with any grand expectations Mr. Farenheit.
2006-08-06


English War Veteran aged 98
Is this a Canabis Poem?
2006-08-06


Arti
Interesting ideas... I prefer getting flowers from a florist... Cant bear to pluck and kill any plants... Love the green too much to do that....
2006-08-04


English War Veteran aged 98
That's a really good one that !!
But there is always an explosion or murder in the plot! or Death !!!

Well it won't be long - we have a few years left in us both - Death where is thy sting?
2006-08-03


Kathy Lockhart
this is deep as the roots of the silent weed my dear. Beautifully done. :) kathy
2006-08-03