actually when i wrote this poem i was in imense pain, my heart was crying alot , i love someone , and i was missing her alot , i hope you too understand the pain thats hiding somewhere behind the words that speak my heart. i await your honest comments abo


whenever you miss someone

lost in a world,
not uncurled.
lost in a pain,
every bits in vain.


running in mangroves,
dark around.
crying to see,
atleast hear a sound.


crawling and laming,
struggling with heart.
scratching and bleeding,
tearing tissues apart.


bleeding eyes can weep no more,
emotions flooding heart can keep no more.


i can hear a sound,
is someone really sighing.
i am pushed to ground,
is someone really spying.


tearing the hair,
fighting the scare.
i wanna hug you,
but you aren't there.


digging the ground,
moving to and fro.
wet due to sweat,
wiping the brow.


i can see u through mist,
but you are far out to reach.
i cant come to you now,
i am caught by a leech.


and as soon as i put all of my best,
i woke up out of this impossible quest.


no matter whatever you do,
how hard the hell you try.
u'll always come undone,
whenever you miss someone.


copyright.






Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-08-26 at 22:33

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Coolaaron88
This poem was excelent. While reading I could feel the sense of you reaching out for something and it wasn't there. Even though it was rhyming I still could feel the immense pain and longing in your words. I loved it and Im sorry you had to go through this. Just keep in mind with pain comes pleasure.

~Aaron Rowe
2006-08-27


zeeshan
thnx kittipuusen
2006-08-26


kittipuusen
Wow.. This was really wonderful ;)
Filled with heartbreake..
It's hard to miss someone like that..
"I wanna hug you,
but you arn't there"
I love that sentence..
I love the entire poem ;)
Hugs*
2006-08-26