we often feel we'll enlighten others life but forget the fact that......


A friend to my friend

I burn to enlighten him

But he's my matchstick.

Haiku by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-08-28 at 23:37

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congratulations for this work!
well done...
It's really good to use simple words of simple thing to give a deeper meaning...
"a friend gives light and helps you see the light".
nice one...

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Wow! I am impressed! A very deep, insightful poem here!
Welcome to poetbay!

I would like to tell you something( I am still learning it my self)
When you write I for example I am I will type the i as I (capital letter) this is a rule in english :)

Take care and keep writing*bookmarked*