Freeze Burn

Cold shoulder like no other
Ignoring your little brother

Leaving the poor out in the dark
Killing the trees at your local park

Loving the lies that come in your house
Wearing a skin tight short knitted blouse

Forgetting the birth of your little child
Hating the people who've always smiled

Cheating the bank and cheating your friend
This destructive path won't ever end

The burn you leave is never-ending
As for your fate, that's still pending



Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-08-29 at 00:20

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Natalie
Hi
This poem is really great,
I love the beginning :)

love
Nat
2006-11-09


Amy Buchanan
I believe too that your actions sometimes have lasting repercussions. We should always be careful how we treat people, especially our relatives and friends. Think before we say anything and think before we act. If more people followed this adage the world would be a better place.
2006-08-30


Saga
Whoever this person is their deeds will be repaid tenfold. I like this blend of expressions and metaphors. Got that "Roxanne" theme to it.
2006-08-29


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Oh,, some nasty thoughts going on here, but I liked the way you wrote them. The last two lines brought the whole piece together for me. :o)
2006-08-29