this poem sounds a bit wise , but its comming from a learner, i seek your guidance, its a humble request if you all can please help me become a better poet , comments and suggestions awaited.....

the silent scream

When innocence is raped,
When a crime is shaped.
When you see the unseen,
When the world around mean.

When life pleads to die,
When there's no land to lie.
When you have to accept the hate,
When you it is your fate.

When love blossoms in heart,
When cupid leaves the darts.
When smile conquers the tears,
When brave conquers the fears.

When things go out of your range,
That's when life becomes strange.

And when life becomes strange........

Too far seems your victory,
Too far seems your dream.
But never do give up,
Coz, There's always a warrior within you,
Just listen to his silent scream.

Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-09-05 at 13:21

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Ariel Bennett
hmmmmmm i never came past this poem until just now very very good work!! i love this poem!

Excellent write! Certainly one of my favorites. I liked the parallelism, the "When..." It just flowed so naturally and it was so simple and uplifting and just awesome! Nice one! =)