This is a response to that poem, I felt it held powerful words and meaning but I want to see what I can come with.


The Fact (In response to Tamar's Forever You Will Be)

Forever you will be

Sown in my heart

Like stitches in a blanket

With no loose ends

To tear them apart

Forever Always




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-09-16 at 20:29

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tamar
Thank you for your comments on my poem and happy that it sparked an inspiration in you to write this one.
2006-09-17