I read your poem and it really made me think so here is my own version of the same poem. Thanks for the inspiration
Not lustful love
The connection between two people
One that thrives in it's own environment
Feeding off the energy created
Making love is precious
Almost like a blue moon
True love is hidden among the blandisment
There are fakes and lies hidden between the lines
Love is real and sad are the people who know not of love
For when you can seperate lust from love
You really know what true love is
True love is not sex or longing to have it
Its a special feeling that occurs when the time is right
One must stop to think about what "making love" really means
Because after life's pages are worn thin by time
I worry about no longer
Making Love
Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-09-24 at 05:55
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Making Love (Response to Love Knight)
Have you ever dreamt of making loveNot lustful love
The connection between two people
One that thrives in it's own environment
Feeding off the energy created
Making love is precious
Almost like a blue moon
True love is hidden among the blandisment
There are fakes and lies hidden between the lines
Love is real and sad are the people who know not of love
For when you can seperate lust from love
You really know what true love is
True love is not sex or longing to have it
Its a special feeling that occurs when the time is right
One must stop to think about what "making love" really means
Because after life's pages are worn thin by time
I worry about no longer
Making Love
Poetry by Coolaaron88
Read 472 times
Written on 2006-09-24 at 05:55
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