I dont really feel this way about love but I thought I'd offer a antithesis


Fake Love

Loves the facade
The fool's gold
The lovely maiden
Made to look like a happy ending

Love, this emotion
Is a mindless trance
Has people doing one thing
Saying another

Love is just as powerful as a bullet
A broken heart is no worse than dying
For both you can recover or can you?

When true love is false

Lustful love is obsession

Friendship love is betrayal

All these loves have an opposite
These all have a consequence

Love Cautiously




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-09-25 at 02:49

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You got it all. But you can't be loved at all time and can't be hated all the time. You'll surely find that person standing to accept you at any time you seem to be the only hated in the whole wider world.
2006-09-25


Leif H T Strand
You show signs of thinking.
Good work from a youngster.
I also see the postmodern stile you are using with no rimes and a poem looking almost like the protest songs in the late 20th century.
Keep on the good work!
2006-09-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there
Aaron a profound text from one so young the truth is heree for all who will see but in my book true love is beautiful even if unrequited rgds mike well done
2006-09-25


Saga
I think Howard Jones said it best "What is love anyway, doesn't anybody love anybody, anyway?". Just remember, you are what you love, not who you love.
2006-09-25