Painful Jealousy

Channels pleasure and desire

Into elements that have a consequence

Finds joy in the simple tormenting of people

Keeps ones mind at bay while figuring out the truth

I thought jealousy was my antidote

Now it's just my poison




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-09-27 at 15:03

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Sabrina
A beautiful poem!

It really makes one relate... Jealousy can become so painful!

Keep it up! :)

Love,
Sabrina
2006-10-01


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Oh, this is almost too good if a poem can be such. It turns mirrors to our faces and makes us assess ourselves. It's just great.
2006-10-01


Wehpudicabok
Whoa! Nice job Aaron-kun.
2006-09-28


Kathy Lockhart
wow Aaron this is hard hitting in the most poetic sort of way. You describe it perfectly! kathy
2006-09-27


Saga
honesty! Sweet honesty!!!
2006-09-27


Veld Cooper
A very clever write, dude! Well done!
Veld
2006-09-27