Valley of Fire ~Part 5~

The flame now put to rest
Would my psyche be at its best
I follow the path back outside
The sun now shines
The clouds of grey now gone away
I look at the face of a brand new day
Feeling now calm
Seeing straight
I had the knowledge that I'd acquire
That was my journey through the valley of fire




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-10-06 at 04:29

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Emeka Chike Nwogu
Every fire produces great things. Remember that gold have to pass through the fire to become admired by all and sundry. A great experience you have there inside that cave of problems. Thank God you are better for it.
2006-10-07


Zoya Zaidi
I loved this series.
One suggestion: You could put it together as one poem in five parts, because one part follows the other and is racy enough to hold the attention of the reader, without the fear of being left half way through because of the lenght...

***hugs for a very good poem all in all Cool**

love, Zoya
2006-10-06


Xuxa
This is a comment on the entire series.
Really nicely put Aaron, short but with lots of emotion. your ability to convey feeling is remarkable. blaze on!
2006-10-06