Careful with that Knife (Jinx Form)

my knife is weak
attacks the unknown
defenseless and shy
my knife is vigilant
open to the truth
knows all and sees lies
hidden in the blanket of contradictions
on the surface
my knife can pierce
your skin, heart, and mind

yet in reason
my knife can do much more
it can end your life




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-10-08 at 23:02

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Aaron a cool scintillating Jinx form well done lololololol
2006-10-09


Saga
At last a cleaner version of a jinx form that makes sense, good job!!!
2006-10-09


Chris Fernie
Dear Aaron,

This is a very menacing, and therefore successful, piece which has all the memorable hallmarks of the song, 'Mac The Knife'. Well done!

Cheers (in fears), Chris
2006-10-08


keith nunes
sharp and to the point - well done!
2006-10-08


Zoya Zaidi
Excellent!
Zoya
2006-10-08